Not bad.
Looks like you really worked hard on this one. Wish I'd used 3D effects on mine as we. Also, I noticed you submitted a preview for this on the Portal. A pointer: if you want to show off a preview of something, next time upload the preview on your website and show it off to the NG BBS or any other Message boards instead of submitting it to the Portal for feedback. I usually do that to get feedback before finishing it.